Immigration is the introduction of new people into another country. Nowadays it’s a really common thing, and there are more and more immigrants in our country. But is immigration good or bad?
On the one hand I think that immigration is good because it gives cultural diversity to our country. Moreover although some people think that they bring unemployment, I don’t. What’s more, I think that it’s really useful for native people because, usually, immigrants work on things that we don’t want to. Futhermore, I also think that immigration helps us to be less racists.
On the other hand, immigration can also be bad. It can be bad because of overpopulation, this happens when immigrates go to a small place that is overcrowded. What’s more, if they don’t have enough money to make ends meet, they steal things; and that brigs violence. Furtehermore, some cities need more people because their citizens have gone away.
To sum up, I have to say that in my opinion we should help more to the immigrants; I think that it has to be really difficult going to another country without knowing what is going to happen to you. Some immigrants die when they’re going to another country thinking that they will have a better life, and when the others arrive they realize that it will be really hard.
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Good Maria. Good organization and use of linkers. However, you should try not to repeat the linkers (Furthermore, What's more). Use other linkers with the same meaning to make your writings sound more sophisticated.
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